Our day

by Charlene   Jun 29, 2004


The day he held me close beside
My heart it cried for joy inside
He held me close with no fear
And there was no one near to jeer
He held me with a passionate love
An angel, he was, sent from above
He stroked my hair and said to me
I’ll hold you close until we can be

We were one as we walked along
Having a laugh and singing a song
We held hands and swung them high
And our heads were up in the sky
A romantic lunch we had in the park
We played out there until it was dark
And then one day he said I love you
Overwhelmed I said I love you too

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  • 19 years ago

    by Chrystal

    Wow that's a beautiful poem. Mine has the same title but it's very depressing. Keep up the good work!

  • 19 years ago

    by LiL One

    This was sooo cute, I love these happy love poems, and yes this poem is good so go ahead and brag, i aint mad atcha girl...keep writin, LiL One

  • 19 years ago

    by yup

    Aww, this poem is really sweet Char. I really enjoyed reading this one.
    Write more like this, love is your talent, cause you have such a big heart. Keep writing

    ~Kelly

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