Khalid you took that conversation and made a beautiful senryu out of it! Beautiful! :)

My friend....a wonderful Senryu, it's amazing where inspiration lies eh? great job guy :-)

I love Senyrus and Haikus, because they're short, but have a beautiful meaning. I love it, awesome job..

I am glad to see that you were inspired by that and managed to write this Senryu. :)
I think you need to try and rearrange the last verse though because you've got 6 syllables there instead of 5. (full = 1, of = 1, love= 1, an' = 1, mer-cy = 2, which adds up to 6).