by broken sword Jul 28, 2012
category :
Friendship, family /
best friends
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Alone and empty I sit here now |
by Hellon
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Manzoor....this is a nice poem. I'm not sure if you left out the reason why these friends are not with you now intentionally but...I really would have liked for you to combine the reason in this verse....left this poem with a feeling of loss somehow. |