Stellar!
Forth stanza line 2 'is to uplift society'
I enjoyed the reading

I can tell you're a wise person lol:)
I truly love this piece, and enjoyed reading it. Great job..

This is an excellent poem with a great message. You speak nothing but words of truth. We do take for granteed the things we have and how easy we can do things and even buy things. It is a fact that everyone is treated different for a variety of reasons but I agree with you in the way that we are all the same and should be treated the same. It is unfair that less fortunate people work harder ro produce goods but are paid less where as people here can be paid a fortune but do very little work.

You done an amazing poem.

We are all people and we should be treated
equally. Nobody is better or less.
People have a tendency taking things for
granted.
Very nice written

Awesome man agree with every word