Nice piece! I enjoyed the flow

Oh nooo :/ I don't like the sadness here Ole....so sad how people know "you don't know what you have until its gone", but don't live their life trying to hold onto it before it leaves.

Simple and so true. Nice write :)

We don't know what we have until it's gone
often we take people or our other significant
for granted. The greass alays looks greener on the other side. Very sad poem

Oh, this breaks my heart. :(
Sometimes in marriages, you just lose track of what truly made the relationship work, you take each other for granted and just don't feel the spark anymore, some even become bored. Marriage is a another career, have to keep working at it.

I'm truly sorry you received divorced papers. However, maybe as this door shuts, another one will open and you will realize what truly makes you happy.

Keep writing!

Very nice way to close the door on your past!

5/5

Sad to know you feel this pain. Keep writing and I hope you find some release and comfort with the words you write.

I like the idea on here that you have wrote about being 2 people walking by strangers and studying them and their faces, then it turns out you walk as one, passing each other who infact now feels like another stranger. Such a sad fact in life that happens, especially after such things as divorce as the pain and anger can be so cruel.

Keep writing.

I really like this poem despite the saddness that divorce brings. I look at in a way of closure and moving forward to the future. It was well written and thoughtful. Keep writing you have a gift for it.