Good piece I like it.

Peace is evidence of sound love. Where Love goes to bed, War keeps wake.

Peace is evidence of sound love. Where Love goes to bed, War keeps wake.

I am 11 and i can see where you are coming from because people want money just to do stupid things with it and wars happen because of this and the word hate and peace rarely comes.
really good poem. it created a picture in my head as you can see. the description is great and the flow is good so it gets you 5/5 for me. well done. keep up the good work and keep writing.

I am 11 and i can see where you are coming from because people want money just to do stupid things with it and wars happen because of this and the word hate and peace rarely comes.
really good poem. it created a picture in my head as you can see. the description is great and the flow is good so it gets you 5/5 for me. well done. keep up the good work and keep writing.