I love the way you wrote this. This is truly a beautiful poem, with understanding and beauty. 5/5

mandy :)

'The street with only a single house'
you should start with
'In a street with only a single house'

'She kidnapped from a beautiful life'
should be 'She was kidnapped ...'
'She is in helpless' should be 'She is now helpless'
'She hate' should be 'She hates'
'I think a flower in this dirty world'
should be
'I think she is a flower in this dirty world'

I hope I will not offend you. But the problem exsists with the tenses.

I really enjoyed reading the story. Good luck.

This is a heartbreaking piece that, I'll agree with Mandy, you have written with 'understanding and beauty'.

This poem signifies the cruelty and the misfortune within this world. A great underlying message.

I loved the final lines... they were the most beautiful, but also sorrowful. These two lines gave me the impression that you were in love with this woman.

5/5