Queen of nature you mastered this piece, perfectly written, loveee it:)

I stop to listen often

of crinkling leaves of grace.

- this reminds me so much of Autumn and when the leaves crunch when you walk on them! It is funny how a leaf can make so many different noises depending on the time of year it is!

Dangling webs of whispers,

beam within the sun.

- what an interesting thought of whispers represented in a spiders web. The imagery is just so clear and leaves a lot of room for interpretation as to what this can be.

Trapped in a rhapsody of loneliness,

I've transcribed my heart to you.

- this first line of being trapped actuallly gave me the image of a fly being trapped in the spiders web and has now relenquished all power over its life to this spider. Or the fly has let its fate lie in the hands of nature.

Exploiting a secret within a breeze,

as a cascading rainbow enchants

your spirit with a kiss of nature.

- what a beautiful picture this creates. and any poem with a rainbow mentioned is just awesome :)

Lovely poem with a lot of curious idea's which can be interpreted in different ways.

Good job as always. x

This was beautiful

I could see the images bein played through my mind

The word choice was perfect

Flawless piece :)

5/5

Now this is a freakin' nature poem. Andrea this is absolutely gorgeous. I like the layout and spacing, too. I thought that gave it a peaceful, slower feel as well.

Ohh the first four lines, I just adore. Beautiful!

I am breathless!!! I haven't read nature poems in months, this one was just refreshing and beautifully-crafted. I felt so peace after reading it, your images were crafted with tenderness and that feeling of having someone so close, your heart so near :) Great write

Please....make a book of your nature pieces...just nature <3....my nature beauty Queen. I love it....simply love it.

You know i love your writing syrup...but this is simply outstanding....just beautiful ....and nominated

Xxxx

"Trapped in a rhapsody of loneliness,

I've transcribed my heart to you."

I especially love this part.

This is definitely one of the best nature poems I've read. It's so peaceful and written with powerful emotions that are easily felt by any reader. Please, keep writing!