Comments : Once Upon A Sorry...

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    What a nice piece that shot my heart in the depth. I really lived every word you said and really thank you for that. BTW I'll nominate it. Just few points I'd like to mention and it's up to you to change

    'Compare to' I think should be 'compared to'
    'it lose it meaning Well it has' should read 'it lose its meaning Well it did'
    'influence to' should be 'influence on'
    'It in my heart to say so but I know I owe it to you...'
    I think it should be 'It is in my ...'

    Thank you for that