That is sooo beautiful Chelsey! Just blew me away.
I love the descriptions and the creativity...some of those lines were AMAZING

and the ending...perfect. i can just picture you and your other half shivering on a deserted beach...with your red nose...cute

Love this

xxxx

Omg @_@!!!!!

I knew you would smash this to pieces but this just picked me up and swept me off somewhere....damn i dont know where.....i cant even think.....ill have to comment properly later becasue at the moment i csnr think lol

Btw this is soooooo nomimated!

Ohhh Chels! You ROCK with nature poems!

The way you started off this piece was breathtaking, the image of warming someone with whispers of words, awww I just love that image.

"The horizon denies this season
and rays beam through her matted,
shades of navy and grey clouds"
^^ I want a picture of this, I loved how you said that the horizon denies this season, you gave it character and personality, just wonderful.

You nailed this one with your images and metaphors. Great job <3
xxxx

WoW chels
I could say that this poem is a winner in my book.
You can be very creative whenever you're writing love poems, and to mix that with descriptions from nature is just dazzling
I enjoyed reading
5/5 never the less

Wanted to come back to this to tell you how much I got out of this poem. I loved reading it Chelsey!

What really caught my eye was how you started out with describing that chill, that frostiness in the air yet the warmth of another person being able to make you know peace and tranquillity...

It reminded me a lot of today, storming all day and it was in the low 60's though it's summer. It felt just like winter.

Great feeling in this poem, you make it your own and your voice (and nature's) comes alive uniquely.
Take care always :)

I do love elegance within nature.... its full of spirit and liveliness and I really love that.... romantic tones sing within this poem... very nice!!

I've read this a while back but couldn't bring myself to comment. This is just breathtaking.

I love the "winters first hello" as a subtle image of snow; it's so unique and creative.
And the sun extending her arms to earth is just amazing. Brilliant wording and imagery here.

"I need you the way this beach
needs a hundred people
I crave you like this sea
craves a sunny day"
^
And this here, Chelsey, is an excellent analogy. I wonder how you thought of that.

You've written about a special, timeless moment and incorporated nature with it flawlessly. You're brilliant. Keep it up!

That was a great read. I really like that.