Comments : Things change

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Nice piece Dirge!
    is there a decent girl out there
    is there a single friend

    It's better to add the question marks '?' to the two lines
    'ah what do i care' if I'm not mistaken should read as 'ah why do I care'
    I enjoyed the reading

  • 11 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Things change, nothing will stay the same
    There is still good and decent people out
    there.
    give it some time and when the least
    expected you will meet a nice girl

  • 11 years ago

    by karyssa smith

    I understand how you feel. i question if there is a friend out there willing to accept me for who I am. good job.