Comments : I Loved You.~

  • 11 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    Oh wow sis this poem is BEAUTIFUL I love it

  • 11 years ago

    by Summer Skye

    Uhm ya.. i dont really like who its to... but yes thank you :3

  • 11 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Those soft golden eye's,
    your gentle tone,
    the way you make my skin tingle
    with every touch
    I Love It All

    Please, please don't ever let go
    soft touchable skin
    your smooth lip...........

    I jus tried editing it without adding any more lines or words though i do thin it could use some more lines..What i like about it is how you describe your love, the imagery is just amazing in this piece.