Comments : Hmm..

  • 13 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    Couldnt have said it better myself

  • 13 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    It Wont Hurt My Pride...
    I'm Proud Of Who I Am...

    just these two lines say it all...As long as you have that pride in you, nothing else matters, you accept who you are without giving a damn bout what other people think and that's good. Keep up with this attitude.

    Your Lose....this is the last line of the last stanza..i would suggest you change it to "Your loss".....

    I really loved this poem, written straight from the heart, great work.

  • 13 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    It Wont Hurt My Pride...
    I'm Proud Of Who I Am...

    just these two lines say it all...As long as you have that pride in you, nothing else matters, you accept who you are without giving a damn bout what other people think and that's good. Keep up with this attitude.

    Your Lose....this is the last line of the last stanza..i would suggest you change it to "Your loss".....

    I really loved this poem, written straight from the heart, great work.

    • 13 years ago

      by Summer Skye

      Yes i am proud of who i am :D and always will be, and i really dont care what other people think, Thank you lots