Hey :)
First of, the title, I get goose bumps whenever I read the word "Death", and it turns on my curiosity.

I LOVE the metaphors you used in this piece. Short but says a lot, awesome job, Baby Rainbow.

Awesome write, I enjoyed reading
very meaningful

Great! The syndroms of death are plenty, but what we prepared and how we're prepared is little and not enough. Awesome write.

That's scary, the demons coming out of the wall and eating you. draining your blood and killing that way.

Nice scene with a few words. well done