It is a very dierent and creative piece. Masters are dangerous beings and incredible puppeteers.Loved your piece.

I love the edge to this, Yes your master loves you but he/she has control.

1 nit pick, line 5 needs a comma after 'doesn't'

I like how reading this once you think about a master and dog, but looking deeper it could be a woman (You?) and her partner.

Line 1 is almost an order, (smile or else)

I love the arrogance in line 2.

The next 3 lines have fantastic imagery.
We then change gear and the tone calms, before the explosive end.

Good pace, nice layout, great Job.