YES!!!!!!!!!!

I'm glad you wrote this- Very proud of you...
You have to let this out...

I adore the way you word the pain from within... You used exciting words to describe a very deep pain. It allowed the reader to come alive and be sucked into your stanzas.... the ending says it all... powerful write Nana!!

The tone of this poem gave me chills. Had to reread it a few times because it was so well written and expressed. I have to agree with the previous comment about the ending, which was also my favorite part. Beautiful write.

To err is human beings, we serve. Forgiveness, demands no reserve.

There are some lines in here that are so amazingly well-written and thougt of, like "blame my hormones" ... women! :P

it's like you're trying to get rid of regret? by blaming it on something else?

gr8 use of colors in the begnning, too! ;)

It is the way you write that always takes me into another world, your world, I can always feel you in your writes, it makes me feel I know you in person...like the sadness you pen is raw and deep...and although it is usually short lived (you are just one strong woman) it stays within me...

I love the emotion you pour into everything...just devastatingly brilliant

xxxx