Comments : Fidelity

  • 11 years ago

    by Thomas

    If you cheat you are bound to get caught

    Vanity is mans worst enemy

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    True, nice work.

  • 11 years ago

    by Darren

    This is awesome Khalid, you love these Haikus dont you, great message, very clever use of words. You dam the cheating male in this very well.

  • 11 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Lol i'm sorry i literally laughed after i read this because it's very true and honestly i haven't done a poem that's with cheating i think so my vanity is not that big but i should make one just to try on what it feels to see my "vanity" in action! i really do like this poem my dear i truly do and this is greatly written! 5/5

    Queen Ash