Your poem is very heartfelt and compassionate. I've lost a few people in my life and can relate to every word. Excellent write
TJ

Rebecca, I am so sorry for you, this poem is very heartfelt and I hope it has in some way vented just an ounce of your pain.
I (sorry we- My wife) have been through this 4 times. It is heart rendering, keep this poem, Frame it and you will always remember him, I went to the extreme and had an angel tattoo on my back with 'a prayer for four babies' underneath.

stay strong.

as for the poem, it is excellent, anyone who reads this will feel your pain,

.................................thanks

This really got my tears flowing. This very deeply and personally touched me and I could feel your pain. Pain does not even describe accurately how it feels to lose a child, or to go through a miscarraige.

The whole poem was very emotional but this part was when my tears burst:

This longing is unbearable,
I can hardly breathe.
I just want my little boy,
To stay right here with me.
Inside me you were safe and warm.

- it makes me think of the thoughts I had about one minute you were there safe and warm and the enxt minute you were gone fromt his life :(

Such heart wrenching words and a topic very deep and strong and I appreciate this must have been very hard to pen.

Of why we had to say goodbye,
Because i will never no.
- no here should be know.

5/5, and I thank you for sharing this for others who will relate to this and perhaps seek comfort in knowing they are not alone.

I feel your pain my dear. I dont know what to say. I wish I could hug you.
Peace
Karla

I don't know what to say, Rebecca...so sorry for the loss you and your partner are going through. If you need to talk to me, then pm me, and I will give you my email adress.

My thoughts and prayers are with you.

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

This is very heartbreaking and I can feel
your pain

Rebecca, we al r sorry fr ur loss..
He was wid u fr d last nine months..
And hw much u have waited evry single day to see his face.
Bt sumthing unexpected has been done.
This Grief wil go wid time..

Last 2 lines touched my soul..
God bles u wid its strength..
And plz dont quit poetry, if u think its an escape fr u..