by Meme
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Love the concept of this one Thomas, starting all clean with endless possibillity. Then adding new stories, new things and knowing that each left a mark. And I love how you endid it hoping it will remain to exist.. |
by Baby Rainbow
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I agree with Meme, I like the whole idea of your poem and you worded this idea very creatively with your words. |
by Mohan
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Good imaginary description |
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Nice imaginery in your poem. I loved it |