Comments : Cane of Hurri

  • 11 years ago

    by One Man Clan

    You happen to write some of the finest Nature poems I've ever seen.
    I love the idea of limbs faltering like rain between the eyes
    such creativity shows exactly what kind of poets you are.
    very powerful

  • 11 years ago

    by Decayed

    Oh God.. why didn't I read this?!

    Your poem is just so damp, it made me feel like I'm in some European wood.

    First, I didn't understand the title, then I told myself A Hurricane? Yes I guess... because there is this stormy eye which is a beautiful description to tell how nature is angry at us. Well, the last line also sums it all up.

    It's a great nature poem, Mother Nature ;)

    • 11 years ago

      by Maple Tree

      You are correct Abed :-) I took the word Hurricane and split it up Cane- Hurri

      because hurricanes violently "break things" so I felt like breaking the word in two and switching them.... thank you for your comment, made me smile, and I love the nickname..giggles!

  • 11 years ago

    by Meme

    Soooooo creative with the title Andrea!!

    Queen of nature is who you are. Ou penned the whole atmosphere of a hurricane in those few words. It had the effect, the strength, the idea, and the depth of a hurricane.

    Well done :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Xanthe

    I love the title; so creative and unique, the concept of it - breaking it apart because 'hurricanes' do break things is brilliant.
    I love how sea-debris-catastrophe rhymed. It flowed so smoothly and elegantly. A very enjoyable and peaceful poem to read, despite being about a hurricane, of course. Perhaps it's what the 'moonlit' added. :)
    Keep writing,

  • 11 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Love, love, love this. Will come back.