This is different, sweet, great and unique poem of you. It simulates the nature. I suggest it may belong to the nature rather the funny type of poem. The syllable count is perfect although the word 'tunes' gave a 2-syllable count rather than 1-syllable but I will consider as 1-syllable. I really encourage you to go on writing such type of haikus being very attractive. 5/5

Thank you, Khalid.
Means a lot. (:

I love any poem about nature. This is brilliant, don't know much about haiku but it portrays a beautiful creative form. You penned this amazingly. I'm inlove with this piece, its calming and refreshing to the senses. Well done!

This is brilliant and your syllable count is spot on actually so don't worry about it.

Great job, showing off your talent here, well done.