Hmm.. hmmm.. hmmm...

hmmm...

something is going on..
I know nothing, though, I love this piece too!

Wow! wow, wow wow. I love this, this is absolutely amazing. My God, you're an amazing writer. I'm at a loss for words right now because this is such a beautifully written poem. Detailing your feelings for this person in an amazing way. I don't know what else to say besides this is so lovely. I'm so glad I read it! Great job!!!

A poem this geniune and strong comes directly from the deepest part of your heart, these emotions cannot be faked or penned without honestly feeling such love that it overwhelms our being. There is much sadness written into it as well- almost an emotional smorgesbord with for all kinds of great stuff on display.

I know beautiful is so cliche...but I found this poem gripping and honest and your love for this person really shines!

I do hope they get to read Chelsea.

Your poetry just keeps getting better and better!

O.....m.......g!!!!!

Ok im ok im on my phone...but ill be back omg ill be back x

Very pretty piece Chelsey... The heart can speak through the pen is a unique elegance.. and I read that within this poem... very nice!

Ok so im back so lets get into this eh?.........firstly omg! You k ow i love your vocab - always have but something is
A little different.......MELTED!!!!!!

Okaaaayyy.....

I fall short; fail miserably when it comes to telling you how I feel.
The reason being, you are more than what I want, but everything
I cannot have. You think that'd give me wings to fly to you and
nest in your paradise, but it restricts me. Restricts me to branches-
that house my isolation

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The way you described not being able to find words for this person is awesome, but then you tell how they are "MORE THAN WHAT I WANT" which is beautiful but then saying you cannot have them is just.....SIGH.

"restrics me to branches that hoise my isolation" <<<<<<<OMG! Where the hell did that line come from and how why didnt i write it!!!

I am far from you, yet you taunt me with being the closest soul
to my heart. Some say to me, there are windows of opportunities
out there for you. I am afraid to tell them, I only wish to open
the one that channels the summers breeze through your hair.

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Ok, to love someone so much it aches is one thing, to be like that when they are so far away is torture and you penned this stanza AMAZINGLY! I love the way you expressed this, i also loved how you mentioned windows of opportunity and how your afraid to tell people about the only one that matters....soo heart felt and heart breaking at the same time just amazing.

My love, find me. Whisk me away into a world where I'll be forgotten.
I can no longer dream of you, for I open my eyes and reach for your touch.
I can not handle these nightmares, for I wake up without your comfort.
Thoughts tantalize my mind into thinking, I am someone else.
That this life I'm living was not meant for me, because I belong with you.

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WTF!!! Seriously this stanza...oh my....as i started to read it i felt a little hope and then as i progress through it just grabbed me and choked me, full of longing and desire and torture rolled into one and is just so well written ..for me it is just perfect.....breathtaking!

There is no hope of touching you, except for this tear embedded poem.
God did not give me these fingers for grazing your cheek before we kiss,
nor for lacing around yours to show signs of security and trust.
My hands were given to me, so I can compose for you-
Declarations of my love

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This last stanza :-0!

I cant even comment.....just read it!!!!!

Chels, you know i love how you write, like i said before your vocab is always amazing and your flow and imagery is never off...but this write is something else entirely, completely from the heart and just poured all over the paper....it is my favourite piece from you by far and it just left me speechless. Love you, love this write, in my favs, nominated printed out eaten just so its close lol

Wonderful beautiful write and i just cant say enough about it x

You are a MASTERMIND!!

OMG Chels, are you for real?
Someone better nominate this cause am out of votes >_<

This is the best piece of poetry I have read in a while, and damn your words just captivate the reader!

I love it, always always write like this.

Oh my ... *Sigh*

I think this is absolutely brilliant Chelsey!!! The heart, soul, emotions in this just flow freely and make me just want to never forget these words....I loved your title so much, it's so enchanting, especially those last words where you ache for your hands to be put to use to compose to this person, to this love. I honestly don't read love poems a lot. I don't know why really. But there was so much depth here, so much I found myself just thinking over, it got me into what you truly are feeling.

There was also a lot of melancholy here- maybe nostalgia for a love you wish to be? What grabbed in this poem was the way your words flowed.....I could taste that despair you were talking about, how you know this person is far away yet they are still pulling you toward them, and that it's a different kind of torture. So much is included in here- I've never felt so much from a love poem- you really tell more than words here.

Enjoyed reading so much- keep it up girl!!!!!!! :)

Really good poem. Might of tried using a different format but other than that I really liked it. The wording was good. The flow could have been a little better but other than that it is a great poem. 4/5

This is my favorite poem of yours and I can't even tell you why, I've read it aloud a few times and I love it... it does not feel cheesy, but genuine and even though the persona is undergoing something painful, it feels as though she's grateful for loving him nonetheless and that's what makes this love so beautiful.

Amazing amazing amazing... this ones again beautiful.... Every word was like amazing... lol Im falling short of words... actually...!!!
but seriously u write wonderful!!
Great:)
5/5 from me:)