Truly i did

by TsogoJonesMatori   Sep 14, 2012


I told you i loved you but u listened to them tell u otherwise about me
I really meant it when i said i was sorry, but u listened to your Godly given sixth sense they" so said u possesed
Th tears realy were for you and so was the hurt i experienced but they" said you'd be a fool if u fell for them
Now here we both stand, hatred brewing and all becaus of them
U should have known... truly i dd mean all and when i said i ws sorry...

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  • 13 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    TJM- I'm really loving the emotions crafted within this heartfelt poem. Its truly from the heart I can see that...

    I do think a good edit and correction of spelling along with format would really spruce this poem up.... if its ok, Im going to show you what I'm trying to explain.... here is an example:

    I told you i loved you
    but you listened to them
    tell you otherwise about me.

    I really meant it when i said
    i was sorry, but you listened to your
    Godly given sixth sense, they said you possessed.

    The tears realy were for you
    and so was the hurt i experienced
    but they said you'd be a fool
    if you fell for them.

    Now here we both stand,
    hatred brewing and all because of them-

    You should have known...
    truly i did mean it all
    and when i said i was sorry...

    There are many ways to format a poem, but this is just an example... I hope I was of some help and again, very powerful and heartfelt message :-)