Awwww sweetie this poem ALMOST made me cry and im not a cryier lol gosh i LOVE this poem sweetie make a sadder poem and iswear you will win the freaking contest gosh i love it small errors of course there was the part where it was supposed to "bride" and the last part didn't quite fit with the other part of your poem but over all BEAUTIFUL! :)
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Thanks for the errors.

Your welcome!:)