Comments : Kiss

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    This is a cute poem. I like the rhyme, it's really good. It's a sweet poem and I love how you added the "Holy" part. The beginning, you show the bit of pain and express the broken heart without adding extra drama, like most do. And it also shows your fear when you say "blown", it's a bit against your will and that plays into the fact that a lot of broken-hearted people shy away from another love. Good.