Orian

by Katherine   Sep 22, 2012


Ok so I'm gonna post two different versions of this poem, one I wrote, and on my friend becca wrote.

Becca's version:
Orion is my everything,
His love is my dream,
For him to hold me so close so tight,
For him to love me all day and night,
There is a passion burning in my soul,
His love makes my life whole,
He's my Brittany,
My one, my only,
My true love,
Is like a dove,
Soaring in the sky,
Oh so high,
He is my constellation,
My one, my only, orian.

My version:
Orian is my secret dream,
Sometimes, it seems, my everything,
I wish it every sleepless night,
For him to hold me safe and tight,
The passion burning in my soul,
Says only he could make me whole,
Why is this torment just for me,
Why can't he see,
He's way worse with her,
Than he is with me
Is this love,
Or just an obsession,
His constellation is burning,
Way up in the heavens,
My secret.

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