So romantic, so sweet Yaki!!! This flowed like honey...it was just beautiful, simple yet spoke in such profound measures. Great write :)

Yaaaaki! @_@!

Such a beautiful write, your word choice was just perfect and the whole tone was breathtaking - straight into my favs :-)

Short ,bt sweet..

I've been swallowing
your glances, one
after the other,
they usually feel
warm going down.

romantic..

So romantically sweet, this poem got a nice flow to it and the words are engaging. Excellent write..