Comments : Wednesday

  • 12 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    " Dreams should come to be
    so my reality will go away "

    Ah, what everyone wishes for sure. Powerful poem, loved it. ((5))
    ~Harlea

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Lmao, this is so funny in this category because it is quite a calm and tame poem until your last line. made me laugh.

    As for the poem... I haave felt this way soooo often, I loved this line : I'm petulant, dour and sulky and I cannot be comforted.

    - this desrcibes me sooo much on most of the days when I wake up.

    Really related to this poem and could picture you just closing the door to everyone in the world on these days just to be alone.

    Great job.