Love and inspiration

by Edward Oropeza   Sep 27, 2012


Sweet scent from the lovely paradise
a gliding leaf toss along the way
season's change, a new chapter

inspired beside you,
roses and lilies charmed around us,
a dance in the pairing heart,
sweet music played by the sparrows,

this lonely place,
occupied by us, a broken emptiness
each whisper of our own, destroys the silence

rhythm of our heartbeats, played a melody
together we are the witness of the love we made,
on this day, here comes the precious memory

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  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Beautiful! I always forget how much I enjoy love poems, it is not a category I visit often, but this poem makes me glad I do, as the wording here was really enchanting and romantic.

    I love how you made the empty space seem filled just by the love itself, this is lovely, and I think it shows the strength of the love.

    Nice work my friend.

  • 11 years ago

    by LoveableKirsty

    Wow I love the ending....

    "Rhythm of our heartbeats, played a melody
    together we are the witness of the love we made,on this day, here comes the precious memory"

    Very deep and touching... Keep it up!!

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