That is so touching, Khalid. I liked your melancholic yet hopeful tone in there. I think 'save' should be 'safe'.

Your ending moved me so much. Great job.

Very moving, very sad.
Weeping may endure for the night, may joy come to you in the morning.

Blessings,

Ken

Very touching piece you have here, I can't imagine the terror that many faces in countries that are at war all the time. I am sure it's painful to see the innocent ones destroy and the wick ones prosper.

This poem is powerful yet heartbreaking...