Amazing bro! & good indeed. I'm sure that Lion's day, was fun! Haha..

Thanks bro! It was all true about my experience with the Lion. I can't imagine facing one in the wild, unless I was Samson!

Ken

Seems like a children's song... nice melody and rhyme, and a good lesson too. I like it.
However, it has the spacing problem again. Don't be afraid to make it long as long as it's easy on the eyes, and don't stop mid-sentence unless for effect.