Comments : Niagara [haiku]

  • 10 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Sighs... I love the moon and the feeling of this poem soothes me... you have captured the moment in all its glory... beautiful!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Mohan

    Gud imagine i love ur idea

  • 10 years ago

    by Formidable Muse

    I've never heard the term "Under a blue sun" it's cool. This is a beautifully written and soothing haiku.

  • 10 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Thank you!

  • 10 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    So beautiful imagery. I loved you chained haikus.

  • 10 years ago

    by Amreen

    I saw niagara through your piece.
    Wonderful piece. You served the true meaning of this haiku.
    One of the best haikus I read on PnQ(:

  • 10 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    This is a very refreshing triple haiku. It's amazing how much imagery can come out of these little forms.

    I haven't heard of the expression "under a blue sun" so that's unique and that's always something to admire.

    I'm not too fond of the "mem'ries" but I'm pretty sure you done it for the syllable count. At first I thought it might have been a typo until I started counting syllables, lol.

    Overall, I love it. Very serene and I can definitely picture the Niagara Falls.

  • 8 months ago

    by Paul H

    Very picturesque. A delightful read .