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by Maple Tree
Sighs... I love the moon and the feeling of this poem soothes me... you have captured the moment in all its glory... beautiful!!
Gud imagine i love ur idea
by Formidable Muse
I've never heard the term "Under a blue sun" it's cool. This is a beautifully written and soothing haiku.
by The Queen of Spades
So beautiful imagery. I loved you chained haikus.
I saw niagara through your piece.
Wonderful piece. You served the true meaning of this haiku.
One of the best haikus I read on PnQ(:
by Hannah Lizette
This is a very refreshing triple haiku. It's amazing how much imagery can come out of these little forms.
I haven't heard of the expression "under a blue sun" so that's unique and that's always something to admire.
I'm not too fond of the "mem'ries" but I'm pretty sure you done it for the syllable count. At first I thought it might have been a typo until I started counting syllables, lol.
Overall, I love it. Very serene and I can definitely picture the Niagara Falls.