Comments : Replete Void

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Sometimes void is a great grace as the body health. But you really did described it right. I did relate to this condition several times. You revealed the importance of incense and dew in this poem, like the spices added to food. Good job.

  • 11 years ago

    by Stephen

    This poem is interesting. I loved reading it, the images depicted paint an image in my mind of emptiness. I'm not really sure what to say about this poem because I think it's really amazing. I'm in awe, and I can totally relate at the moment, I suppose that's why I'm at a loss for words. This is truly beautiful in it's own right, thank you for sharing this!