Awe dont cry :( thats not smiling but it is a good poem and i like the emotion in it keep up the good work 5/5

I think the sadness that within this poem is what makes it good. Nice flow and heartfelt piece.

This is quite a desperate cry inside a poem, I wonder did you mean Gods to be plural? As in more than one god? I think this made it interesting if you meant this because most people write about one god, or direct to god, but this poem seems to be direct to more than one god.

Crying is a complex things and means different things for different people... but I believe everyone cries eventually, no matter how long they hold in it.

Yes i meant plural and i've been holding it in for about 5 years now...

I also held tears for a really long time, and really terrible things where happening, but i wasn't gonna cry, and i even smiled more, and it was hurting like crazy, but i got something good, and that was when i finally did cry or in your words,''the dam did break'' and i cried so hard, and repeatedly, for even alot of things not worth crying about, that i'm not sure which was worse.

I really loved the poem, cos it was so relatable, at least from my own point of view :P

well i'm gonna say if you really wanna cry, then i wish the tears come, but be sure u wanna break that dam first, cos it sucks the first few times and it's pretty humiliating lol

This poem hit home for me, truly. That feeling of not being able to cry, especially when true pain strikes you is terriible. Holding in all that emotion is like waiting for a bomb to go off in front of you. Powerful work!