Just beautiful....don't we all want this? Sigh*...

Little bit speechless.

Nominating :)

Really a beautiful piece... has so strong emotions... Excellent:)

I like your flow its realy nice

This is so beautiful :-) Im sorry for not commenting more, but Im simply speechless...
:-)

Amazing piece ! well done:)

Love poetry taken to another level! This is the drug we can't get enough of, absolutely beautiful!

I love the conrtasting lines here, like how you describe love which is meant to be something beautiful but you add in the oppoisite words related to abuse and harm. This is such a powerful idea and describes your state of mind and what you have been through, love is never easy and how we imagine it to be.

I adore this poem, and can relate to it in 2 very different ways, the love side and the darker side between the lines.

Nice work,