by Donovan Oct 9, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
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You once mentioned to me |
by Baby Rainbow
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Wow.... this is beautiful, I love this so short and sweet, It should be a verse on a card, it is just lovely. |
by Donovan
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Thank you! I played around with a few ideas in the poem and actually after i submitted it, I came up with a better ending. The structure of the ending didn't really fit the flow of the rest of the poem in my opinion, but I'm not perfect. Thank you for your compliments! |