Trees

by Donovan   Oct 9, 2012


You once mentioned to me
That our love is like a tree.
Growing tall and branching out
As far as it can be.
And you're right,
our love grows everyday-
In the summer, spring, fall,
And in every way.
So as our trunk grows thick,
And our roots grow deep,
Let's remember why God
Wanted us to meet.
Full of life,
And simply meant to be.
Our love grows everyday-
Kind of like a tree.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow.... this is beautiful, I love this so short and sweet, It should be a verse on a card, it is just lovely.

    Well done, hope to read more. I love the idea of a tree growing every day but no one ever taking the time to notice this and realise it. Your comparison to love was very creative. I enjoyed this!

    • 13 years ago

      by Donovan

      Thank you! I played around with a few ideas in the poem and actually after i submitted it, I came up with a better ending. The structure of the ending didn't really fit the flow of the rest of the poem in my opinion, but I'm not perfect. Thank you for your compliments!