Nice. Before long, you will have enough poems (songs) for an album. This is something most females would love to hear from the man who loves her. Just feels sweet and nice when reading, gives a warm and fuzzy feeling.

Very nice written

I agree with Sylvia..this is something that most
females would love to hear from her man...there is a longing and a sense of loneliness within this write and I hope it changes for you...take care :)