Breathtaking.....just breathtaking.......no more i cant write nature please, this was perfect x

Wow... awesome.... I loved the entire imagery here chels.... Its just so descriptive... Well done(:

Read this yesterday but couldn't comment because it got my emotions stupor but will try and do so now. First of all WOOOOOWWW!!! ;-))

This is just an epic masterpiece, you potrayed this season; I presume autumn or fall, very exquisitely. The personification of a body to it gave it an indepth coat of immaculate finish. You're just so amazingly creative dear, feels so surreal with this.

It says more than just the gradual detrimental slope of this season rather how you ambiguously transplanted a message effectively. An enchanting piece of art.

Bon Travail ma chere, Adieu! Hugs..

Chels this was amazing I loved the tittle such vivid images , stunning piece

5/5

Chelsey...firstly, my sweets. Congrats on yet another amazing and well deserved win...
Secondly, why I hadn't read this until now, I have no idea, I know I've been busy and there's been a lot going on...so I apologise.

To the poem,
It is utterly beautiful, the portrayal is just really effortless and the natural essence in this makes it all that more captivating...the imagery was vivid and I could really feel this piece.

You really are an exquisite writer with heaps of talent and the admiration I have for you is just growing by the day...
Love this, love you

and once again Congratulations my girl.
xxx

Congrats chelsey!

I love your personification here Chelsey! You have such strong images here that just stick with me, I feel like this is so naturally read. When I first read it I just gasped at this "to break the hearts of believers, condemn the sinners..."

What a perspective, you make this season (I think winter?) come alive with an attitude and feeling here! Congratulations on the second win!!! So happy for you XD

Congrats sweetie :))

Wow Chels Chels, this is amazingly powerful. The flow of this one is so fast beat and each new line holds a unique image which you have painted so clearly. You done a great job describing the season.

"Her presence is enough to suck the blood out of human veins"

- I imagine this to be the sudden drop of temperature which makes you feel so cold like your blood has been drained.

This is definately about nature, but it also has a little bit of darkness inside it also, with the consequences of people or the creatures who interfere with her ways. Your language is quite dark in places , especially the second verse. This also ties in with the season aswell, cold, dark, gloomy and depressing.

Well done on the win and I am sorry to take so long to catch up, but glad to see it won! xx

Outstanding!

I don't know why I haven't commented on this one. Well, maybe because I was so busy with school when you submitted this masterpiece, lol.
I don't really know what to say but this is one of my favorite poems by you. It holds a great message, the imagery is amazing, and I just love the tone you used throughout the piece. Fully deserved win. Congrats!

Double post :)

Beautiful poem. Very well written. Loved the imagery you created within it. Simply beautiful!!

5/5 Karla S.

P.S. Congratulations on your wins!!