Comments : I give up

  • 11 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    This is rather a somewhat stage in most relationships one gets stuck in. Quiet detrimental to one in a quaint way, only if its worth it and doing such will cause an improvement for a better cause. However, one shouldn't 'I give up', when obviousy the odds are against one. In a relationship one shouldn't be subjected to an iota of unworthiness. Ones ideals and stance should always be a priority even though there're comprises to be made, which is a normal factor but not when one is been taken for granted. That's not a just cause and not respectful on the persons persona.

    A partner should always feel a sense of belonging and needed not a burden.
    Good meesage and a breakthrough after not penning in a while. You'll get out of the hang, not to worry. And this piece is quiet lovely. Keep writing!
    :-)..

    • 11 years ago

      by Aveena

      Thank you so much for encouragement and such ! (:

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Quite often this happens in unequalized relationships, especially the random and non predetermined ones. In this case I support the iron woman who can better defend herself and keep being undeafeted all the time, cause she never know or expect he'll leave her any time in such a bad situation with no one to support or help.
    In your poem this is revealed quite obviously, where you are the weaker half but you shouldn't. Nice piece.

    • 11 years ago

      by Aveena

      Thanks you so much :)