Comments : Easy Mark

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    This is so powerful and honestly good for you. I love poetry that shows the author stands up for themselves....awesome awesome awesome.

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I adore this poem!! Defo one of your best. I have to admit that when I was reading your poem I actually had someone in mind that I thought you were writing about but was surprised when I read your after thought and realised i was perhaps wrong on this, after re reading the poem again, and again, I feel it still fits for this person and also the people who we do not know that well but have all of these traits above and control they think they have on us.

    I really related to this and the way they try to manipulate and be involved in your life, but not because they want to be but because they feel the need to be involved in everything around them, then maybe they wont be so intimidated by you if they can pick apart your secrets and fears.

    Awesome write and I totally got every word and would love certain people in my life to read this as I am sure others would find very helpful too.

    <3 this one!

  • 11 years ago

    by Acoustic Odyssey

    Well damn, I feel like this should be put on a shirt, or a motivational poster. No wonder why you can see so much green from space, these marks stain over half the known planet. From religion, to stardom, to high school, even the next door neighbors...everyone just needs to learn how stray from gossip and mindless assumptions and just live their lives.