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  • 11 years ago

    by Karla

    Sometimes our muses leave us. I can relate to your words a lot.Love and pain are two strange forces.They can make us write or not.Take care my friend.
    Love
    me

  • 11 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    This is an evoctaive piece, full of deep thoughts. Our emotions are a mixture of uncertain feelings made up of happiness, worries and sadness. We get clouded trying to administer peace of mind or finding a way to appease our conscience. Life is a mixture of the sweet, sour and bitter moments coupled together.

    We need to experience sad trials to appreciate the good times. Likewise we need to be in happy moments to be grateful to be blessed not to be strucked by hard times. Its a dual way and can only be dealt with by creating a balance to always be ready for any unexpectancies.

    Lovely message. Goodwork!

  • 11 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Sorry for the additional post. It was a mistake..

  • 11 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Lots of people prefer a bad relationship over no relationship at all, Rebecca...to be alone is only bearable for selfish people who love to be in their own company.

    Well done, yet so sad

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 11 years ago

    by Mohan

    I agree with ingrid
    and i like to give you one of my favrt quote,
    i am always like the reality
    its my loneliness.
    I mean reality is better than anything because i too hurted like you in the same way..
    nice poem i like it..

  • 11 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Another so sad poem Rebecca, but like all your work, I loved it!!!
    You are truly talented in the written word.