First cancellation

by Ole Carsten   Oct 28, 2012


One part of me understand,
And respect all as an adult.
The other part of me is screaming,
Like a child lost a parent.

It is only a journey lost,
There is no reason not to wish you well.
The solid ground has be shaken,
I am sinking into the abyss.

We have seen worse before this,
I understand all, with my brain.
My body does not, I feel cold,
The ship is sinking in the Arctic Ocean.

Take an extra day and get well love,
All will soon be fine again.
I fear all and I see the writing on the wall,
It is getting cold and dark around me.

Wait until it is better for you,
The winter might be hard on you dear.
My winter started when you broke a promise,
That was the day hell froze to ice and the angels fall.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I don't even know where to begin.
    This write here is way different from the ones you have written in the past. I feel
    the sadness, a broken promise, perhaps broken heart. All these factors can turn our feelings in to ice
    Excellent write Ole
    Add to my fav

  • 13 years ago

    by Formidable Muse

    "The solid ground has be shaken,
    I am sinking into the abyss."

    "My winter started when you broke a promise,
    That was the day hell froze to ice and the angels fall."

    ^^ Those two sections are my favorite, I felt a lot of power in them while I was reading.

    I liked how the beginning of each stanza showed love and that you cared in a way and the bottom half of each one showed sadness/pain. I think that was very clever.

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