Comments : A Flight in the Blue

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    A breath of fresh air, A silent peace to live, a serene melody and a breeze of satisfaction is what I live at the moment after reading your piece...
    I need not say much Yakori.. You are a gem!!
    Mesmerizing:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Ridge

    This is more than excellent

  • 11 years ago

    by Formidable Muse

    "Beaming down the ocean its reflection mirrors an
    amorous attraction to the winds call for warmth."

    ^^ Wow, such a beautiful picture, this poem is very lovely. I enjoy the elegant words you use to describe nature.

    This reminds me of standing upon a mountain or giant rock and looking down at the beautiful surroundings and enjoying every little detail of nature. I especially liked the last sentence.

    • 11 years ago

      by Yakori bint Muhammed

      Thanks for commenting, much appreciated. You said it right, 'enjoy every little detail of nature'. :-) ..

  • 11 years ago

    by ArtistrySoul

    I like your choice of wording in each short stanza's. You collectively illustrated an image or small cameo for each of your stanza's which is more than creative in a poem :)

    Gracefully written 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The flow is perfect and the imagery is outstanding I also enjoyed your choice of words