Best ending ever. Seriously.

Seriously aweeesome write chels, such a strong write it is breath taking!

I would say more but its 5:30am lol

If i could id nominate this...great write.

Double post :/ but like i say its 5:30am lol

This poem says it all... you grabbed it in every line and I agree with Britt... the ending is awesome..... yeah this grabbed me..........

Whoaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! Chels, that was WOW!! @_@

Iloved how you decided to voice this piece to three different people, you spoke your mind in a very straightforward manner!

First part just broke my heart into pieces, to have loved and lost. The way you gave every cell of your being to this person. I guess you are like me, when we love we give a lot and expect a lot in return but that doesnt always work, does it? You walk away with a broken heart, but hell yeah you can find someone else, someone better who really appreciates the person you are!

For the second part, I genuinely like the warning tone you set for the next girl in line, or may I say the next prey? Now I dont know what is it that made you voice her. It might be the thought of him being able to move on and you are still stuck in there, or thats how I saw it.

Finally, that last part you dedicate to the one you await for his arrival one day, now thats what I call my favorite part! I loved the yearning in your words. I felt that you were looking for a cure, for someone to mend the broken pieces of your heart. It just made sigh!

Amaaaazing, brilliant, and one of the most touchingoieces I read in a while.

xxx

Stellar!