You took this title and smacked it.... actually you truly wrote the rush and rise and fall of the pills... sighs.. oh this was powerful!!!

Cara you kick ass!

The structure and form you have used works exceptionally with this title, as its got a messy edge to it... And a "junkie" legal or not is far from being pristine looking.

... And the rhyming scheme may not work how its "supposed" to ;)...
but it also works with your message as with pill popping, alcohol isn't usually too far away and the rhymes were for me like hidden "hick ups!"... I love it!

I say its a masterpiece of your displeasure! :D

Thank you ladies...

I love your spin on this Natasha

"A masterpiece of my displeasure."

Without a doubt.

WOW what an amazing poem

THank you Lillie.

♥ this!