Comments : Lost

  • 13 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Well done on the challenge this is really unique

    Good Job :)

  • 13 years ago

    by ah satan 666

    Thanks tony :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I really liked this one for the challenge and I actually do find it very funny. It made me chuckle. You took a totally different approach tot his challenge so well done. xx

    • 13 years ago

      by ah satan 666

      Thankyou saffie :),

      I was just explaining what was going on in my head at the time lol

      I often play games with words in my head before I jot them down.... I'm glad you liked it :) xx

  • 13 years ago

    by Mohan

    Excellent written
    keep writing

  • 13 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Double post =/

  • 13 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Lmfreeeaaakinao!!!

    I just spat coffee every where, and theaward goes to the most unique write to date lol

    Funny as hell but i gotta say you convey thought process really damn well here, i read it at about 10moh drifting all the way!!

    Great write Natasha :)

    • 13 years ago

      by ah satan 666

      Thanks dude...

      ... But don't blame me for your lack of self control... Get a bib :p

  • 13 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Omg I giggled with this!

    So often writers have so many things played in their heads with challenges, and this was a perfect display of it :) Often times lose their pens as well when they have their ideas together lol

    great job hun! Really really awesome write :)