Comments : Everlasting Sand

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    For the Sand?

    Nice title, I wonder why you chose sand...

    is it because sand slips through the hands? So it will be a challenge of time to see if it can stay there?

    I'm a bit lost at the symbolism in this piece, but I like how it sounds when I read it.

    There are some parts that seem to make sense, but haha you are right, we both wrote about sand and the ocean. Weird.

    I'll come back to read it though, and see if I can understand it.

    • 11 years ago

      by Blood of a Lion

      Ah don't worry about I didn't reread this one I just posted it and apparently its not that great. I'll always be a 4 star writer I guess.

  • 11 years ago

    by Blood of a Lion

    Edited to the best of my abilities. x3

  • 11 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Are you kidding this is sooooooo with a five:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Are you kidding this is sooooooo with a five:)

    • 11 years ago

      by Blood of a Lion

      Thanks. Its definitely appreciated glad you liked it.