Good emotions here and I like the way you set this piece, the flow is good... Sometimes people just confuse your course cuz they themselves aren't getting a way to solve their dilemmas.....
I suggest the title of this poem should be 'put an end to an end'

Typo in para 2 on line 2...
an should be and
dosent should be doesn't...
:)
I liked the piece... Keep it up

Loved it, kept me holding on to the very end, great job, it packed so much emotion inside of meWOW

Yes no end for end in love
and you prefectly penned 5/5

Gudone kristi..

Thanxs everyone,it means much,thnak you :D

Beautiful words yet sadden