Comments : Put an end to a end

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    Good emotions here and I like the way you set this piece, the flow is good... Sometimes people just confuse your course cuz they themselves aren't getting a way to solve their dilemmas.....
    I suggest the title of this poem should be 'put an end to an end'

    Typo in para 2 on line 2...
    an should be and
    dosent should be doesn't...
    I liked the piece... Keep it up

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Loved it, kept me holding on to the very end, great job, it packed so much emotion inside of meWOW

  • 11 years ago

    by Mohan

    Yes no end for end in love
    and you prefectly penned 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Gudone kristi..

  • 11 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Thanxs everyone,it means much,thnak you :D

  • 11 years ago

    by Bobby

    Beautiful words yet sadden