Blissful... I am always at lost of words when I read your nature poems... Wonderful words, a treat to read.... Awesome and creative and vivid imagery created:)

I love the beautiful imagery captured in a poetic flow. Interesting word choices . I enjoyed reading this

Powerful one,comrade. Long time my poetic sister.

A Chat with my Cosmos. I love it. I love how the poem reflects using different harmonious words throughout to describe everything and what you could be feeling.

But in a way I feel like this could be metaphorical, like I can imagine what is happening as I read with what you describe, but I feel like to you if could be a metaphor with a much deeper meaning?

The ending is what makes me think that,

"to commune with the seasons in my next chimera. "

^^Because referring to the seasons as a chimera, would that mean you are going to conquer then within your imagination? And if you are setting out to do that, would that mean you have already done that with the cosmos? Which makes me wonder if it's a metaphor for something else.

I don't know, I tend to over think everything and when I'm tired I ramble. haha.

But this is a very creative and beautiful poem.

Gracious Yakori, I know you love getting comments from me sweety, but I have run out of words to comment on your poetry. This is beyond perfection. Your wording is incredibly deep, so much more than poetic, just a beautiful display of images you leave in your readers minds.

This is brilliant....really it is, gorgeous!