Speechless......i know what your saying....i understand those lines and what is in between them ......even so i am unable to comment other than to say .....you wreck me.

I adore you Cara x

Competely, utterly, speechless. Cara, just.. Wow. Beautiful, amazing job.

I think your spirit is finally fully stretching out its wings missy, and allowing the breeze to play with your feathers...

This one is all yours Ben...

All I will say is, it has a seductive and passionate tone to it!

WOW!!
This is beyond amazing, beyond what words can say. The rawness of your emotions and yearning is screaming from each and every word. The mixture of vulnerability and strength you showed is flawless..

"Touch me-

When I ask.
When I'm afraid to ask."
^^
This just said it all!!

This piece is one of a kind in the feelings it leaves with the reader.

Great job :)

xxx

Thank you =)